The chart below demonstrate the propotion of tourists who came to England to visit four different Brighton attractions between 1980 and 2010.

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the

propotion

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proportion

of tourists who came to England to visit four different Brighton

attractions

between 1980 and 2010. By 1980, the festival

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had been more popular than other

attractions

. Despite the fact that

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the festival

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was constant for thirty years it had become less popular, by 2010. We can see the same graph trajectory with the pier, by 1980, in which

this

type of

attractions

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had been the least popular, but

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percentage suddenly grew from ten

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to

twenty two

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and had left the

last

place, by 2010. During the 1980s and

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there was a sharp increase in visitors to the

pavilion

from

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to

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.

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the percentage gradually had gone down to

thirty one

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, by 2010,

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the

pavilion

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was the most popular attraction in 2010. The number of tourists who visited art

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in 1980 was

twenty two

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, but it had rocketed to

thirty eight

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, by 1985, but it

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quickly decreased as it grew up once and became the least popular

attractions

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. By 2010, the art gallery had had only eight

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. In

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, the graph has big changes and

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shifts from 1980 to 2010. The festival and the pier had the first and the

last

places at the start, but

at the

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the most popular was the

pavilion

and the least popular was the art gallery.