Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have the status of role models, in particular for younger people. Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

At present, influencers appear more in human life because of the evolution of social media
such
as Youtube, Tiktok,...
This
leads to a significant issue in modern life which is the spread of junk information. These people can take advantage of their
fans
to make
money
or to fulfil their personal purpose. In my opinion,
this
is fully a negative development in recent life. At
first,
the main worrisome about
this
development is the personal profiteering of the well know people. They can use their famous to ask
fans
to donate them if they want to interact with the idols.
This
won't be a problem if it is just a small amount but it is a worrying thing because the
money
they want is too big and some of the
fans
are at the age of studying. Those can not make
money
, so they take it from their parents and give it to their idols. And the recipients know that, but they leave it alone for self-profit. These things will make young
fans
spend
money
unreasonably when cannot make it, thereby making them form extravagance.
Besides
, another problem with celebrities is those influences. If it is used for a good reason, it can completely create positive values for society.
Nevertheless
, it rarely happens in the present society, the influencers are now regarded as a propaganda tool. They usually get advertisements for illegal things for
money
.
For example
, betting and gambling companies can use
this
tool to attract players and seduce them to pay to play, or even some organizations based on popularity to promote disinformation to people, which can lead to social disorder and reactionary protest. On the whole, celebrities might be useful for spreading information though
this
can be used for malicious purposes.
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