Mrs barrett an english speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to hellp her in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write a letter 150 word suggest how you cloud help her in her home say whay you woud like to do this work explan when you will and will notbe Available

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Good morning Mrs Barrett. My name is Manusha wimalasiri. I am
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Sri
lanka
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. I saw your
advetised
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advertised
that
your
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looking for someone to help you in your home for a few hours a day next summer.
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Also
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I am really
intrested
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interested
to get
this
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oppertunity
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opportunity
. A few years ago I was working as a cook in
hotel
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. So I can help you
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domastic
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domestic
task
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in your house and
made
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your meals for breakfast , lunch and dinner.
Forthemore
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, I enjoy the work for
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the hospitalaty
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hospitalaty
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hospital
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the
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cooking is my passion I love making food for everyone
this
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make
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me happy.
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I am
international
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student,so
i
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go to
the
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school in.
at
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the afternoon
Monday
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to
Firyday
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Friday
form
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1.30 till 5.50 and
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on the weekend. I am able to the work Morning and weekend. Thanks for your time. Kind regard
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