Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, the phenomenon of wasting
water
is happening constantly. In contrast
, few people
are committing to a minimalist life such
as saving as much water
as they can. Although
some people
are against limiting the use of water
, some believe that it would be a positive trend in the foreseeable future.
As for the first point, a great deal of reasons have been involved for water
use for most American families including swimming pools, sprinkling abundant water
for grass and car washing. For example
, my cousin felt depressed when he couldn’t utilize the water
freely due to
the government’s water
restriction because he required vast amounts of water
frequently in the summer for maintaining his pool and held activities of Thailand Songkran Festival in April for children and friends. He believes that people
should have the right to use water
whenever they desire as long as they can afford the fees Add an article
the water
while
elevating their standard of living and also
bringing them joy.
On the other hand
, some argue that people
could obey government’s
policies for using Correct article usage
the government’s
water
in
specific times for saving Change preposition
at
water
in order to supply some places sudden
demand for Change preposition
with sudden
water
from droughts or fire while
also
providing individuals the
most basic life requirements Add the preposition
with the
such
as water
. For instance
, I went to India a few years ago and observed the nasty main river and unclean drinking water
, hence
a large number of people
eager
for healthy Add a missing verb
were eager
water
passionately. So that I realize the reason my Indian neighbor
Change the spelling
neighbour
insist
Change the verb form
insists
not
Change preposition
on not
to
Change the verb form
watering
water
garden
frequently but Correct article usage
the garden
reserve
Wrong verb form
reserving
water
for more important needs.
In conclusion, based on the information mentioned, we can say that government
has been doing its best to conserve Correct article usage
the government
water
. However
, some people
refuse to not waste the
Correct article usage
apply
water
which is quite alarming. From my perspective, although
it is a sophisticated issue, I believe saving water
would be an informed choice and responsibility for all citizens, governments and local bureaus could not only enact stricter policies for using water
but also
encourage citizens compete
to gain fabulous rewards which may make a better ecological balance for human.Fix the infinitive
to compete
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