Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent years, the phenomenon of wasting
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is happening constantly.
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, few
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are committing to a minimalist life
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as saving as much
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as they can.
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some
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are against limiting the use of
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, some believe that it would be a positive trend in the foreseeable future. As for the first point, a great deal of reasons have been involved for
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use for most American families including swimming pools, sprinkling abundant
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for grass and car washing.
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, my cousin felt depressed when he couldn’t utilize the
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freely
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the government’s
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restriction because he required vast amounts of
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frequently in the summer for maintaining his pool and held activities of Thailand Songkran Festival in April for children and friends. He believes that
people
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should have the right to use
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whenever they desire as long as they can afford the fees
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elevating their standard of living and
also
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bringing them joy.
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, some argue that
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could obey
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policies for using
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in
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specific times for saving
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in order to supply some places
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demand for
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from droughts or fire
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also
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providing individuals
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most basic life requirements
such
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as
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.
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, I went to India a few years ago and observed the nasty main river and unclean drinking
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,
hence
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a large number of
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eager
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for healthy
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passionately. So that I realize the reason my Indian
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insist
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insists
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not
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on not
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to
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garden
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frequently but
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for more important needs. In conclusion, based on the information mentioned, we can say that
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has been doing its best to conserve
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.
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, some
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refuse to not waste
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which is quite alarming. From my perspective,
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it is a sophisticated issue, I believe saving
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would be an informed choice and responsibility for all citizens, governments and local bureaus could not only enact stricter policies for using
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but
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encourage citizens
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to gain fabulous rewards which may make a better ecological balance for human.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater
  • personal freedom
  • resources
  • daily necessities
  • environmental sustainability
  • depletion
  • regulation
  • distribution
  • underprivileged
  • future generations
  • conservative use
  • sustainable practices
  • monitoring
  • regulating
  • judiciously
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