Many employers are employing people with good social skills as well as good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that good social skills is as important as good qualifications to succeed in job?

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Employers look for some qualities in an employee at the time of recruitment .Some people claim that a
well qualified
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job seeker must
also
possess good social skills in order to be successful in the workplace.I completely agree with
this
statement,
beacause
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because
a qualified worker who is social can create a happy environment and healthy
competition
at
work
. The primary reason,employees with social
skill
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always certain that they bring high quality
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atmosphere
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in
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the enterprise.
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, they can time spend with
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own age groups and they will
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comfortable.
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,if you
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in
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company
that
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where
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everyone
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very friendly so you can
work
with good mental health.
Furthermore
,employees with good social
skill
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skills
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can get adapt
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situations and they can perform well.So it will solve
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the problem
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problem
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quickly but still give good
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in
work
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the work
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area.
Secondly
,these workers with social skills are not only competitive but
also
create healthy
competition
amoung
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among
colleagues.A company can progress, Only if the employee
are
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competitive.So,there must be
a
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healthy
competition
amoung
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among
workers.
In other words
,some
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must be encouraged and appreciated by everyone.
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,
this
motivates
themselves
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put
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into
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in extra
efforts
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to achieve success in
the
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career. In conclusion,even though employers must consider many qualities before hiring an employee,
two
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most important ones are qualified and good social skills to be considered.Because,the working environment needs to have healthy
competition
and happiness
,
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so that it can progress
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