The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the correlation between
crime
and age group and the pie chart depicts the crime
rates broken down into four types (violent crime
, property crime
, drug crime
, and public order crime
). Both graphics present information about crime
data in the United Kingdom in the previous year.
Overall
. the highest figure for criminals was between the people aged 12 to 28 which shows a serious problem with following the law in this
age group, while
the least number was for the under 8 years old group. the majority of crimes
were violent crimes
and the smallest segment was for public order crimes
.
The peak of crimes
went to the people in their 20s with around 800000 crimes
, while
people between 44 and 64 years old did under than 100000 crimes
last
year. Moreover
, kids under 8 years old have no crime
record at all.
Most Of the crimes
were violent by type at 46% of the total rate, followed by property crime
. drug crime
with 23% and 22% respectively, while
the least percentage of crimes
went to the public order crime
type with only 9% segment.Submitted by bousaadhazim on
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