nowadays, many
people
want to be famous with the development of social
media
. becoming famous is easy to gain.
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too fast
make problems with their famous. In my opinion,
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a negative development.
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many
. Many teenagers, even
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spend their time
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social
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so much on a daily routine. So many
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on social
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facebook, youtube, tik tok,... it many ways to be famous and very easy to do
this
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smartphone and little skills edit video. Social
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is
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to
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their dream to be
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. They can
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show their personality to attract followers or they
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their
. Or even they can post a daily routine and many like
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not a
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, they try to make everything to be famous but they cannot. So they decide a way very
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that
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the video is not unhealthy.
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everyone angry and attract
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views. they
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given
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success and raise very much money with no investing too much and no effort. After they had received many
from many
people
, they began
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and ask for forgiveness that they do. They promised that will change and
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be better and receive
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sympathy from everyone.
Lastly
, they become famous and earn
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money.
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trend
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so much that
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network
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fed up with what famous do.
Becoming
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too fast that they face up many
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. They do not
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professionally and have a mistake.
Therefore
, they
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violented
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the internet. they put up with
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pressure and
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. They
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end up with their life.
in conclusion, with
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of platforms, becoming famous is easy to
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than
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past. But, it
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many hapless.