The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the
the
results of Remove the redundancy
apply
survey
that sampled a Add an article
a survey
the survey
cross section
of Add a hyphen
cross-section
travelers
at Change the spelling
travellers
major
metropolitan Add an article
the major
airport
about the purpose of their trip, the survey was carried Fix the agreement mistake
airports
for
the months of Change preposition
out for
March
, June, September, and December in the year 2002.
It is clear that
the highest percentage of travelling reason
was for Business purposes in the month of Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
March
2022. By
contrast
the lowest percentage of Add a comma
,contrast
reason
for travelling was Other, which was Add an article
the reason
also
in March
2022.
In 2022 March
and September the main reason
for travelling at major metropolitan airport
were 73% & 53% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
airports
Holiday
was Add an article
The holiday
second
most travelling Correct article usage
the second
reason
in the months of June and December at 54% and 35%.
Visting
family was not the main Correct your spelling
Visiting
reason
. However
, the greatest percentage by far 26% of people visiting family did so in December 2002.While
the Other category was fairly stable throughout the year at between 3% and 5%.Submitted by PONKAJ DEY on
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