The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrated information on ten nations for the production and consumption of
electricity
in the year 2014.
Overall
, it is noticeable that China
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produced the most while
Korea at the least on the chart in consuming and producing electricity
.
For the production category, China
ranks first with almost 5,400 kwh
, America was the second,
this
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this country
these countries
countries
produced about 4,100 kWh
, next up was Russia, Japan, India and Canada, it is obvious that those are countries
with large populations, so the amount of electricity
need to produced was massive. France, Brazil and Germany had approximately in kwh
with 561.2, 530.7 and 526.6. The last
rank belongs to Korea which produced only 485.1 kWh
of electricity
in the year.
In the consumption category, China
still ranks first with 5,322 kWh
, this
show that China
's consumption was very high, far from the other countries
by a large distance, Followed up was America for almost 4000 kwh
, next was Russia with 1,038 kWh
, Japan with 856,7 kWh
, and India with 698,8 kWh
. Surprisingly, despite the fact that Germany has low production of electricity
, they consumed the
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electricity
more than the amount they produced. Those 4 countries
Canada, France, Brazil and Korea had nearly figures with no less than 400 kWh
, no more than 500 kWh
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