The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportionate usage of water solvents in different sectors in North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
, Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
.
Overall
, there is more use of water for agriculture among these six regions than is utilized in industry and domestic. In comparison, North
America
and
Europe
have a higher percentage of industrial use of the solvent than others.
Firstly
, Central
Asia
, Africa, South East
Asia
and South
America
have a sequential higher rate of 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71% for agricultural purposes respectively. Next came second with a variation of 39% for
Europe
and 32% for North
America
.
Furthermore
, from the charts, industries use a lower amount of water among these states, when compared to its usage for farming and house chores,
although
there was an increased at a per cent of 53 and 48 seen among the North Americans and Europeans respectively.
Lastly
, the usefulness of the solution in households
also
has a similar variation within three regions (
Europe
, South East
Asia
& North
America
) but has a slight rise ranging from 2% to 9% for Africa, Central
America
and South
America
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words america, europe, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • predominant
  • variance
  • agricultural irrigation
  • residential consumption
  • industrial processes
  • environmental impact
  • economic factors
  • cultural practices
  • government policies
  • sustainability
  • conservation
  • trend analysis
  • resource management
  • efficiency
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