The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

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The pie charts illustrate the proportionate usage of water solvents in different sectors in North

America

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, South

America

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Europe

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, Africa, Central

Asia

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and South East

Asia

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, there is more use of water for agriculture among these six regions than is utilized in industry and domestic. In comparison, North

America

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and

Europe

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have a higher percentage of industrial use of the solvent than others.

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, Central

Asia

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, Africa, South East

Asia

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and South

America

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have a sequential higher rate of 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71% for agricultural purposes respectively. Next came second with a variation of 39% for

Europe

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and 32% for North

America

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, from the charts, industries use a lower amount of water among these states, when compared to its usage for farming and house chores,

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there was an increased at a per cent of 53 and 48 seen among the North Americans and Europeans respectively.

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, the usefulness of the solution in households

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has a similar variation within three regions (

Europe

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, South East

Asia

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& North

America

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) but has a slight rise ranging from 2% to 9% for Africa, Central

America

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and South

America

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problems of traffic and polluon. What effects do you think this move can have? What other measures do you think can be taken to reduce traffic and pollution ?

Some companies use a lot of packaging when selling their products. Why is this? Is it a good thing?