The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts the 6 stages of the
glass
recycling process
, and how this
procedure is fully automatic and performed without human interference except with transporting glass
to and from the recycling factory.
The first phase in the process
is delivering the used glass
bottles
from the green recycling bins that have the 3 arrows recycling sign to the treatment plant, the second stage is washing and sterilising the used bottles
in a special machine that purify them from any polluted substances, after that, a different machine crushes and melts the cleaned glass
bottles
and transfer them glassy liquid that moulded into new bottles
in the fifth stage of the recycling process
.
After being safe and proper to hold consuming products , the final stage is delivering the new recycled glass
bottles
to the supermarkets from the treatment factory, so people can use them and recycle them afterwards in the same process
again and again which benefits the environment and avoids wasting resources.Submitted by bousaadhazim on
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