The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Ausralia in 1999

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Ausralia in 1999
The table gives information about the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Several years ago, in 1999, there was a proportion of people from different household types, who lived in poverty. Each of them had ,unlike amounts.
For example
, they were from 21 per
cent
to 4 per
cent
. There were various types of families in that period.
For example
, single aged person, aged
couple
, single, who had no
children
, sole parent,
couple
with
children
and their rank was dissimilar.
For instance
, at the top of the list was sole parent, which was 21 per
cent
.
On the other hand
, the least of them was the aged
couple
, because
this
kind of family was per
cent
.
Also
, the single aged person was 6 per
cent
and
couple
without
children
was 7 per
cent
. A higher percentage of the family type was single without
children
, which was 19 per
cent
and it holds second place.
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