The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Ausralia in 1999

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Ausralia in 1999
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The table gives information about the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Several years ago, in 1999, there was a proportion of people from different household types, who lived in poverty. Each of them had ,unlike amounts.
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, they were from 21 per
cent
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to 4 per
cent
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. There were various types of families in that period.
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, single aged person, aged
couple
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, single, who had no
children
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, sole parent,
couple
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with
children
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and their rank was dissimilar.
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, at the top of the list was sole parent, which was 21 per
cent
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.
On the other hand
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, the least of them was the aged
couple
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, because
this
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kind of family was per
cent
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.
Also
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, the single aged person was 6 per
cent
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and
couple
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without
children
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was 7 per
cent
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. A higher percentage of the family type was single without
children
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, which was 19 per
cent
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and it holds second place.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "for example".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent, couple, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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