The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Ausralia in 1999
The table gives information about the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Several years ago, in 1999, there was a proportion of people from different household types, who lived in poverty. Each of them had ,unlike amounts.
For example
, they were from 21 per cent
to 4 per cent
.
There were various types of families in that period. For example
, single aged person, aged couple
, single, who had no children
, sole parent, couple
with children
and their rank was dissimilar. For instance
, at the top of the list was sole parent, which was 21 per cent
.On the other hand
, the least of them was the aged couple
, because this
kind of family was per cent
. Also
, the single aged person was 6 per cent
and couple
without children
was 7 per cent
. A higher percentage of the family type was single without children
, which was 19 per cent
and it holds second place.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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