The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Ausralia in 1999
The table gives information about the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Several years ago, in 1999, there was a proportion of people from different household types, who lived in poverty. Each of them had ,unlike amounts.
For example
, they were from 21 per Linking Words
cent
to 4 per Use synonyms
cent
.
There were various types of families in that period. Use synonyms
For example
, single aged person, aged Linking Words
couple
, single, who had no Use synonyms
children
, sole parent, Use synonyms
couple
with Use synonyms
children
and their rank was dissimilar. Use synonyms
For instance
, at the top of the list was sole parent, which was 21 per Linking Words
cent
.Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the least of them was the aged Linking Words
couple
, because Use synonyms
this
kind of family was per Linking Words
cent
. Use synonyms
Also
, the single aged person was 6 per Linking Words
cent
and Use synonyms
couple
without Use synonyms
children
was 7 per Use synonyms
cent
. A higher percentage of the family type was single without Use synonyms
children
, which was 19 per Use synonyms
cent
and it holds second place.Use synonyms
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