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Nowadays, not many university students choose science subjects in many countries. What are the reasons? What are the effects on the society?

#university #students #science #subjects #countries #effects #society
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The fact that many
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students
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 don't choose
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subjects
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 is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world.
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 the effects related to
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 tendency. There are a variety of different causes for
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 matter.
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 with, learning
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subjects
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 need more time than
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 other. Because the student must study many recipes and numbers.
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, these recipes and numbers are difficult to remember.
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, math is a subject that student doesn't like it. Another contributing factor to mention is that
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subjects
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 need more costly to study at
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 in many countries.
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, the cost to learn advanced math is 70$ per term at the Ho Chi Minh City
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 of Technology and Education.
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, almost not many
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students
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 select
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subjects
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 in many countries. Unexpectedly, there are some significant effects. The first and most important is that not many
students
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 choose
science
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subjects
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 which makes society decrease human resources to
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 jobs for the future.
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, the reduction of learning
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subjects
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university
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students
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 maybe decrease many engineers for businesses. Another effect no less important is that the future will lack human resources for research and development of projects of the world. In conclusion, the selection of
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subjects
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 for
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students
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 is a big problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. It's mainly caused by the
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 jobs will decrease in the future. From what has been discussed, if too many
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students
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 learn
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subjects
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then
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 it is advised that reduce the factor effect on the learning of
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