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Nowadays, not many university students choose science subjects in many countries. What are the reasons? What are the effects on the society?

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The fact that many
university
students
 don't choose
science
subjects
 is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world.
This
 essay will examine the factors
as well as
 the effects related to
this
 tendency. There are a variety of different causes for
this
 matter.
To begin
 with, learning
science
subjects
 need more time than
subjects
 other. Because the student must study many recipes and numbers.
Furthermore
, these recipes and numbers are difficult to remember.
For example
, math is a subject that student doesn't like it. Another contributing factor to mention is that
science
subjects
 need more costly to study at
university
 in many countries.
For example
, the cost to learn advanced math is 70$ per term at the Ho Chi Minh City
University
 of Technology and Education.
Therefore
, almost not many
university
students
 select
science
subjects
 in many countries. Unexpectedly, there are some significant effects. The first and most important is that not many
students
 choose
science
subjects
 which makes society decrease human resources to
science
 jobs for the future.
In addition
, the reduction of learning
science
subjects
university
students
 maybe decrease many engineers for businesses. Another effect no less important is that the future will lack human resources for research and development of projects of the world. In conclusion, the selection of
science
subjects
 for
university
students
 is a big problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. It's mainly caused by the
science
 jobs will decrease in the future. From what has been discussed, if too many
university
students
 learn
science
subjects
then
 it is advised that reduce the factor effect on the learning of
students
.
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