"The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one University dead after finishing their graduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists and work after 5 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant"

"The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one University dead after finishing their graduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists and work after 5 years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant"
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The pie chart illustrates what careers Anthropologists got after finishing their undergraduate studies at a certain university.
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, the table reveals their salaries 5 years after graduation.
Overall
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, students managed to get full-time jobs, or part-time careers or fully focused on their post-grad studies and a few of them remained unemployed. There is
also
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diversity in employment types as they worked as freelancers, or in Government sectors and private companies.
According to
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the pie chart, more than half of the anthropologists obtained a full-time job ,
meanwhile
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only 5% of them continued their post-grad studies
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having part-time careers. Only 12% weren’t able to find a job
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they remained unemployed. The table chart reveals the salaries of the anthropologists after 5 years of work experience. Generally, there was a fluctuation in all the salaries but interestingly 30% of them are getting paid more than 100,000$ followed by a little decrease of 5% who are able to gain less than 100,000%.
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, 10% and less got a yearly income of up to approximately 50,000$.
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