the chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015
The bar chart illustrates the worth of certain states’ exports of several
products
in 2 consecutive years, whereas
the table gives information about the change in proportions of such
categories during the same time frame.
Overall
, there was a slight increase in income in 2016 compared to 2015. Furthermore
, it can be noticed that the change in prices percentages also
increased after one year (except for Gems and jewellery).
It’s clearly seen that petroleum products
were the highest in 2015, and reached the peak in 2016, as it has slowly grown up by almost 1%. Engineering goods came second. Although
it was roughly 58% billion, it has jumped up by around 5 billion dollars after 12 months. On the other hand
, Gems and jewellery witnessed a decline of just under 4$ billion, while
agricultural products
remained steady.
Controversy, textiles values significantly rose by 15.24%, followed by engineering products
(8.5%), then
Petroleum goods (3%); however
, agricultural products
are considered just the same, meanwhile, gems and jewellery interestingly decreased by 5% just after 12 months.Submitted by gamilkhaled3 on
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