The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. 

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided presentation of the human-made process illustrates the method of manufacturing,transforming
clay
into brick for the assembly service.
Overall
,
it is clear that
this
linear process takes 5 main stages,beginning with the excavation process of
clay
by using a digger and finishing with the transporting of delivery service.
Firstly
, the
clay
is dug up from the ground with a digger and after that, it is filtered into tiny pieces through the metal grid with the assistance of a roller.After that, filtrated
clay
is combined with water and sand,
therefore
it can be easy to stereotype.
Following
this
,
bricks
ought to be shaped by using a mould.
Moreover
,they must be stored in a drying oven for 1-2 days and after that,all
bricks
are put into a cooling chamber for 2-3 days,by placing them into the kiln,at various degrees of temperature,moderate between 200 and 980 and high, which is 870-1300 degrees respectively.
Finally
,manufactured
bricks
are bundled into cubic form before these
bricks
are delivered to the building industry by a special transport delivery service.
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