Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information.State which you consider to be the most effective. Comics Books Radio Television Film Theater.
There are different kinds of communicating
information
to media all over the world. For example
, comics
, film
and theatre. They are also
basic ways to obtain information
and news about everything happening in society. Nowadays, they are very popular in the world and most people
watch them.
There are many advantages and disadvantages of these things. On the positive side, these things give People
a lot of information
and experiences about different conditions happening in today's society. For example
, many Actors in film
and theatre will have roles in different conditions. And in the comics
, People
write critical articles and humour. They may show the attitude of the government to the population by criticising ways, and how new devices in technology are used in other things. When people
read and watch them, they may know their opportunities to do something, they get cultural entertainment and their perspectives will expand. And I consider the most effective and better is film
. Because of this
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For instance
, if people
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or theatre and read various articles in the comics
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To sum up
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information
through comics
, films and theatres has both advantages and disadvantages. However
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people
may get necessary informations
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite