The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given two diagrams portray the ways to reach a hospital in
Change the article
the year
year
2007 and 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, we Linking Words
observe
in 2007 Wrong verb form
observed
the
Correct word choice
that the
car
parking facility was being utilized by both, the public Use synonyms
as well as
the staff. Linking Words
Linking Words
While in
2010, there Correct word choice
In
are
two Wrong verb form
were
seperate
parking, one for staff and another for Correct your spelling
separate
public
.
Add an article
the public
To begin
with, looking at Linking Words
2007
map we see very little development. There is only a single Correct article usage
the 2007
road
that approaches the hospital. Use synonyms
Similarly
, a bus stop can be seen in the east of Linking Words
city
hospital. Correct article usage
the city
However
, a Linking Words
car
park facility is available in the north of Use synonyms
city
Correct article usage
the city
road
.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in 2010 a lot of development Linking Words
is
observed. Wrong verb form
was
Although
, the bus stop has been removed. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, a roundabout is made there for ease. Linking Words
In addition
, two new roundabouts are constructed on Linking Words
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
which Use synonyms
are
connected to a bus station on its left and staff Change the verb form
is
car
parking on its right. Use synonyms
Lastly
, for Linking Words
patients
ease, a separate public Change noun form
patients'
patient's
car
parking is built adjacent to Use synonyms
ring
Correct your spelling
Ring Road
road
.Use synonyms
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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