The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The preceding bar chart depicts the proportions of the total world
population
in
India
,
China
,
U.S.A
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the U.S.A
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, and
Japan
between 1950 and 2000, It
also
shows predictions of
population
in 2050.
Overall
,
China
has the largest
population
in the globe, followed by
India
,
U.S.A
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U.S.A.
,
then
japan
Capitalize word
Japan
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comes at the
last
place.
China
and
Japan
are showing a gradual decrease in their
population
in contrast
to
India
which is showing a gradual increase in their citizens count. There is a gradual decline in the percentage of
china
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China
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people count, going from an all-time high of (26%) in 1950, to (24%) in 2000 , and it is estimated to fall to nearly (19%) in 2050.
on the other hand
,
India
has shown a gradual increase in the
population
going from (15%) to (19%) in 1950 and 2000 respectively. It is predicted to reach (21%) in 2050 being the highest nation in people count. There is a gradual drop in
Japan
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Japan's
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population
by nearly (1%) throughout the time period, making it the lowest occupied country among the four.
while
U.S.A
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the U.S.A
show examples
started with (10%) in 1950,
then
dropped to approximately (8%) in 2000, it is predicted to stay the same in 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 5 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • World population
  • Percentage
  • Projection
  • Demographics
  • Trend
  • Significant change
  • Ranking
  • Shifts
  • Decline
  • Growth
  • Comparative
  • Population distribution
  • Notable
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Population dynamics
  • Data interpretation
  • Summarize
  • Trends over time
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