Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing videogames. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes believed that outdoor

activities

would be more beneficial for

children

's development than playing

videdogames

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video games

videogames

.

While

I understand why some people may oppose

this

opinion, I still wholeheartedly agree with it for several reasons. Opponents of

this

view may have several arguments. They may well argue that

videogames

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can teach

children

to use technology fluently, which is extremely essential in the current society. Since everyone nowadays works with computers, kids playing

videogames

would grow up with better knowledge of computer hardware; thereby helping them to fix some computer's minor errors. Another possible argument is that playing

videogames

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can serve as career

inspirations

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.

For instance

,

children

who are interested in gameplay or

graphic

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graphics

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of

videogames

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video games

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might be motivated to become

a

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video game

desinger

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designers

or a

pro-gamer

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.

Nevertheless

, I still agree that engaging in outdoor

activities

is always better than playing

videogames

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video games

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for various reasons. Chief among these is that outdoor

activities

are better than video games in enhancing physical health. Playing video games means sitting in a steady position and looking at

high-contrast

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screen for an extended period, which

is weakening

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the ability

of

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movements

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and

damaging to

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children

's eyes. The second reason is that doing outdoor

activities

is a way to connect to the people

closeby

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.

For example

, when participating in outdoor games, like soccer,

children

would have a chance to communicate with their teammates; thereby developing a sense of belonging with others. In conclusion, it is understandable why some may not support the idea of encouraging

children

in

engaging

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outdoor leisure

instead

of playing

videogames

.

However

, I still strongly agree with

this

suggestion given the

aformentioned

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aforementioned

reasons.