The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000.

Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features,

and make any relevant comparisons.
The given two pie
chats
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below
gives
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information on the changes in the worldwide
population
of different places between the period 1900 and 2000.
Overall
, during both the period Asia had the largest
population
in the
world
.
Whereas
north
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America
was stable during both
the
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period. The worldwide
population
during 1900 was about 1,600 million. Asia had the largest percentage of
population
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in the
world
with 60% of
total
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the total
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.
While
Europe had 25%
population
(including Russia). The two western continents North
America
and Africa contributed 5% and 4.5% respectively. Latin
America
had 3%
population
in the
world
whereas
other places were about 2.5% during 1900. The worldwide
population
during 2000 had reached
to
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almost
6billion
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6 billion
. Same as 1900, in 2000 Asia had the largest
population
in the
world
but with
decreased
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in the percentage to 54%. North
America
was at
same
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the same
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percentage as
1900
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in 1900
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. Africa and Latin
America
had almost doubled
the
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population
during 2000. The Middle East and North Africa region had 6% of
total
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the total
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population
.
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