The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The given two pie
chats
below Correct your spelling
charts
gives
information on the changes in the worldwide Correct subject-verb agreement
give
population
of different places between the period 1900 and 2000.
Overall
, during both the period Asia had the largest population
in the world
. Whereas
north
Capitalize word
North
America
was stable during both the
period.
The worldwide Correct article usage
apply
population
during 1900 was about 1,600 million. Asia had the largest percentage of population
in the Add an article
the population
world
with 60% of total
. Add an article
the total
While
Europe had 25% population
(including Russia). The two western continents North America
and Africa contributed 5% and 4.5% respectively. Latin America
had 3% population
in the world
whereas
other places were about 2.5% during 1900.
The worldwide population
during 2000 had reached to
almost Change preposition
apply
6billion
. Same as 1900, in 2000 Asia had the largest Correct your spelling
6 billion
population
in the world
but with decreased
in the percentage to 54%. North Replace the word
decrease
America
was at same
percentage as Add an article
the same
1900
. Africa and Latin Change preposition
in 1900
America
had almost doubled the
Change the word
their
population
during 2000. The Middle East and North Africa region had 6% of total
Add an article
the total
population
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