The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars ($). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5

different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars ($).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant.
Infrormation
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Information
about the
avarage
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average
income in the Republic of Ireland throughout five years is presented by a bar chart.
Overall
, there was a trend in the second half of the
20-th centery
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20th century
for the earning to
rise
but
this
did not continue in the
two-thounsands
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two thousand
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when there was a slight decrease.
Nevertheless
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the
profection
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perfection
is
fro
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a dramatic
rise
in the future. The value of the average earnings was at its lowest in the year 1968, just under eight thousand US dollars. There was a
rise
of over two and a
half-thousand
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dollars in the following ten years and almost the same increase in the decade after that. The peak was at around fifteen-thousand dollars reached in 1998 but followed by a drop in the year 2008 with thou higher similar to the ones two decades before that. The
preditction
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prediction
predictions
for the year 2018 is for a drastic
rise
climing
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climbing
up to 20, 000 $.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • projections
  • steady increase
  • decline
  • significant peak
  • drop
  • trends
  • comparison
  • growth
  • external factors
  • historical events
  • measurements
  • average earnings
  • US dollars ($)
  • Republic of Ireland
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