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The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.

The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.
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Nowadays, online shopping has taken a large share
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 marketing. The pie chart in the question
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 the online shopping status between the year of 2003 to 2013. Trave is the largest online trade till 2013 from 2003, in
comparision
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comparison
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base
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 year, decreased
7
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%. In 2003, 36%
travel
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sell
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, at that time
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was higher than any other category.
Secound
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Second
 highest was clothes, 24%. Books and
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film
/music
combindly
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combinedly
combined
 have taken 40%
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 in the chat,
repectively
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respectively
 19% and 21%. In the year
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2013, the biggest percentage of
sell
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sales
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 was film/music which
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increased in relation to
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 session, it saturated at 33%, one
thired
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third
 of the total
sell
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sales
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.
Second
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 largest
sell
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sale
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 was travel, which is 29%. And the
sell
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 of books and
cloths
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clothes
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 are respectively 22% and 16%.
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