The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The illustrated line graph gives data on the forecast of the
Japanese
by their age ranges from 1960 to 2040.
Overall
, the proportion of people aged 25-64 stays nearly the same, while
the rate of 0-14 aged people declines throughout the period.
To begin
, 0 to 14 years aged Japanese
citizens form 30% of the whole population whereas
, this
particular indicator for 65+ old citizens accounts for only approximately 5% in 1960. However
, in the mid
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mid-2000s
2000s
these markers will hit an equilibrium of 20%. Add a comma
,2000s
After
this
point, the tendency changes. In detail, the portion of 0-14 aged Japanese
goes down to 10%, in contrast
the percentage of elder (65+) Japanese
people reaches
over 30% by 2040.
The ratio for the middle-aged (25-64) populace of Japan fluctuates slightly over the given time frame. SoChange the verb form
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this
figure represents around 65% at the beginning of the shown specified interval and reaches its peak in 1970 and 1990 with a sharp 70%. To the end of the noted span of time, the percentage drops to just below 60%.Submitted by samid.mustafayev20 on
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