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The graph and pie chart below give information on in-house training courses in a large financial company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and pie chart below give information on in-house training courses in a large financial company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A
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column
 chart is given, illustrating the different in-house training courses which
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 done by the managers and the
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secretary
secretaries
 in a popular financial company, categorized
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 4 items, and
also
 a pie chart reveals the
hours
 which any of these lessons took from these people in the year. A glance at the pie chart reveals that
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 the amount of
time
 which is spent on technical education was in the first place in
this
 list. regarding technical training, it
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covered
covers
 half of these people's whole
time
 with 30
hours
 per year and stands in
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first place as
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career development ranked two
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 the list with 15
hours
, holding a quarter of the whole figure, which was 5
hours
 more than the
time
 they spent on
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 skills.
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last
 but not
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least was health and safety with only 5
hours
 a year
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 on it. Comparing the percentage of managers and
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secretaries
secretary
,
it is clear that
 in all cases, there
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 only a slight difference between their choices.
Additionally
, they both were
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rolling
enrolling
 for important for job
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items
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 more than any other options with more than 83% for managers and less than 77% for the other group. Next came good
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excuses
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 for a change with
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nearly
 65% and almost 62% for bosses and their fellow
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staff
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 respectively.
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records
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 for good for
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networking
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 was 50% and approximately 42% and for the
last
 course of
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waste
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 of valuable
time
 was just over 10% and a little under 9% for management group and workers respectively.
Overall
, a great part of the company seemed to enjoy including in the job importance courses,
while
 they were not interested in knowing much about
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waste
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 of valuable
time
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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