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you are going on a month trauning programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have

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Dear Training Organiser: Thank you for taking the time to review my request.
This
 is Yunhan Chen, writing
this
 email in regard to my interest in the role of social
event
 organiser. I have the related experience of being part of the marketing executive of my previous company, with the achievement of successfully holding an
event
 of more than 300 people.
That is
 the reason I think I have the competence for the role.
Moreover
, I am good at communication between both the participants and future public relationship partners. With my ability, I hope I can help the affair with great success.
However
, I still have a concern about the payment and the
event
's purpose.
First,
is the role count as unpaid work-study or part-time job? Do I need a work permit to get the contract?
Second,
does the occasion set the goal of building a cultural connection between the UK and China which coincides with the purpose of the course that I am taking right now or a welcome
event
 for all the students? Hope to hear from you soon, Yours Sincerely, Yunhan Chen
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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