Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter  describe what you like about the library  say what you don’t like  make suggestions for improvements.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
this
letter to express some of my ideas regarding the improvements to the public library which were advertised on your website. I am your regular customer for 2 years and I am always here when I want to read and do research on my thesis for my study. I really like your library because of the atmosphere, it is well ventilated and the books are well organised too on the bookshelves, it is easy for me to find the book that I needed. One thing that I do not like is the lighting it is too dark for me
especially
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during the evening and the chairs are not comfortable to sit in for a long time. I would appreciate it if you could change the chairs with pads or cushions so that we are comfortable.
Additionally
, for the
lighting
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it would be a natural light that could be beneficial for the eyes of the reader. Yours Faithfully, Cherry
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • suggest
  • recommend
  • propose
  • advise
  • commend
  • commendable
  • improve
  • enhance
  • expand
  • extend
  • benefit
  • accommodate
  • organize
  • community events
  • programs
  • collection
  • e-books
  • digital resources
  • signage
  • workshops
  • classes
  • skills
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