The graph below shows the proportions of workers in three different sectors in South Korea between 1981 and 2011
The line chart illustrates the percentage of workers in three sectors in South Korea during 1981-2011.
Overall
, between 1981-2011, The majority of employment worked in the service sector. Moreover
, the employment rate
in the service has an upward trend while
agriculture has a downward shift.
To begin
with, the employment rate
for the service sector in 1981 was just slightly under 40% and keep went up steadily to approximately 70% at the end
of the period (2011). Conversely
, the worker's proportion in the agriculture sector just drops during the period. In 1981, the rate
of workers in agriculture was just above 30% then
decreased significantly until 1991 to 10% and then
it progressively declined and finally
dropped sharply and hit a low of roughly 5% in 2011.
On the other hand
, the rate
of workers in the industry has fluctuated during the period. In 1981 there was just under 30% worker in industry and then
it keeps increasing to just about 35% in 1991 and then
progressively falling until 2011 to around 25%Submitted by usafakhri on
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