You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an interview has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: - state your reason for writing - briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibility to cancel it - propose a convenient time for an interview

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to request an alteration needed for an

interview

September

3rd. On that day, I am travelling to meet my uncle who is currently residing in Surrey province. As an airline journey has already been reserved departing on

September

2nd at 8 :00 P.M. and returning on

September

4th at 5:P.M.

Also

, if I cancel

this

flight, I would receive merely sixty percent as a refund.

Therefore

, I will not be available for a Face-to-Face

interview

with a student named Lucy.

This

interview

is related to her observation about the facilities rendered by our college.

However

, I will come back on

September

5th in Campus.

Hence

, an another

interview

could be rescheduled on

September

5th.

Hence

, it would be great if you can email me the deatils of schedule of the

interview

. I hope you would comprehend it, and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Rajwinder Kaur Brar

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

159 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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