The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The provided line chart illustrates information about
change
in the number of people living in countries between 1970 and 2040, the data presented Add an article
the change
a change
10-years
Correct your spelling
10-year
interval
and on the percentage scale. Fix the agreement mistake
intervals
Overall
, in 2020, the higher population
contry
is Malaysia. Correct your spelling
country
Also
, the lower population
contry
is Correct your spelling
country
thailand
.
In detail, Thailand's Change the capitalization
Thailand
population
increased to about 30% from 1970 to 1990, And then
, they after
almost did not Correct word choice
apply
changed
between 2000 and 2020. Change the verb form
change
However
, their population
figure will be
increase to Unnecessary verb
apply
aroud
50% Correct your spelling
around
until in
2040.
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by
In addition
, the number of people of
Malaysia had 30% in 1970. But, they will Change preposition
in
be
go up to 80% in 2040. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
, Indonesia
pollution had about 15% in 1970, Change noun form
Indonesia's
However
, they
will increase to around 60% too. And, Philippines people figure was up and down to 30%, 50% ,40% and in 1970, in 1990 ,in 2010 Correct pronoun usage
it
repectively
. Correct your spelling
respectively
On the other hand
, after in 2010, they will again incresea
to 50% until Correct your spelling
increase
in
2040.Change preposition
apply
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