Nowdays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same job. What problems does this cause? What are the possible solutions?

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including modernistic young
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of 18-30 are most modern in anything than other ages.
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that it is the best way to improve in their
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of
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for older
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have more new information and they can work for long hours which can be the youngest
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make progress in being in modernize if they do
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and illustrate their qualify so they get rid of
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to be better in their work. In conclusion, more and more
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with younger
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how young
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from older
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by active labor and modernistic young
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the solution to
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matter are to be better in technology and attention of employers to them.
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