The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summa se the info ation selecting and repo ing the main features, and make compa ons e relevant.

The chart  below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summa se the info ation   selecting and repo ing the main features, and make compa ons  e  relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
families
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in owned and rented houses in two European countries over a period of 92 years (1918-2011).
Overall
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it is clear that
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there is an upward trend for people having their own houses,
while
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families
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renting accommodations generally decreased between 1918 and 2011.
In addition
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, renting a
house
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had become a more popular choice after 1971. In 1918,
families
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who had their own
house
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accounted for around 77% of the total population in England and Wales, and
then
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declined to approximately 68% in 1939 and remained stable over the following 14 years. After that, the figure for
house
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-owned
families
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consistently dropped and reached its lowest point at just over 30% over the next 83-year period. By 2011, households having houses rose again to 35%. The figure for
families
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in rented accommodation grew from roughly 22% in 1918 to just over 30% in 1939 and remained steady between 1939 and 1953. Over the following 48 years, the figure for households who rented accommodation dramatically increased to its peak at just under 70% and
then
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fell back to 65% by 2011. In 1971, households in owned or rented accommodation constituted the same proportion (50%) of the total population in England and Wales. After that, the number of
families
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who preferred renting a
house
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exceeded
house
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owners.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, house with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Housing tenure
  • Owned accommodation
  • Rented accommodation
  • Percentage
  • Trend
  • Shift in ownership
  • Historical context
  • Housing market
  • Housing policy
  • Post-war
  • Property ladder
  • Economic factors
  • Demographic changes
  • Mortgages
  • Real estate
  • Housing bubble
  • Buy-to-let
  • Housing affordability
  • Social housing
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