The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The provided diagram depicts the
prosedure
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procedure
of
water
filtering production, including how it works and how the entire step of the
process
happened.
Overall
, the
process
of cleaning
water
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the water
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generator is divided into 2 stages,
started
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starting
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from
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with
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filtering using sand, charcoal and gravel respectively, resulting a healthy
hygene
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hygiene
water
before it
save
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saves
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into
storage
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a storage
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drum. In
the
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apply
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stage one, the
water
is
pour
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poured
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into
plastic
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a plastic
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barrel, the
storage
tank with
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a water-filter
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water-filter
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water filter
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which have 3
layer
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layers
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of filtering
process
with the plastic lid
in
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on
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the top side, before it will pass into
sand
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the sand
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filter, and continue to
charcoal
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the charcoal
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filter and enter
the
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the the
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gravel section. The
water
will
continues
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continue
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to flow through
second
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the second
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tank which is
storage
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a storage
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tank using
pipe
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a pipe
the pipe
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. The second stage is
water
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storage
storaging
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storage
, the
process
of collecting the clean
water
into
storage
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a storage
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drum, offering
easy
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an easy
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way to use
this
water
such
as drink or bottle filling using 2 ways valve to open and closed the
water
pipe, which can
makes
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make
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the
water
filling through
storage
drum is effective as possible
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, process, storage with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • illustrates
  • simple water filter
  • constructed
  • functions
  • produce
  • clean drinking water
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • introduction
  • explanation
  • construction
  • description
  • filtered water
  • original water source
  • conclusion
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