Write about the following topic. The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In the contemporary era, there is ongoing debate about whether mobile
phone
should be restricted in several Fix the agreement mistake
phones
area
Change to a plural noun
areas
as well as
smoking regarding its implications. This
essay argues that people
have a choice to use
their phone
wherever. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
In addition
, phone
has several modern features that Add an article
the phone
people
needed in daily life.
Despite the fact that mobile phone
have
several negative Change the verb form
has
impact
associated Change to a plural noun
impacts
to
antisocial in society, some Change preposition
with
people
believe that mobile phone
should not be forbidden in certain places since it has a lot of benefit in this
modern era. People
can use
phone
for several Fix the agreement mistake
phones
activities
like marketing, communication, and entertainment. For example
, the influencer will works
using their Change the verb form
work
phone
24/7 to make a
money, offering Remove the article
apply
positive
impact of Add an article
the positive
the
online technology.
Correct article usage
apply
In
the other hand, Change preposition
On
people
may believe that phone
should not be used Fix the agreement mistake
phones
in particular
activities
, such
as dinner or family gathering
. Fix the agreement mistake
gatherings
This
is not only because mobile phone
can Fix the agreement mistake
phones
distracting
Wrong verb form
distract
mind
Correct article usage
the mind
while
talking but also
due to
the fact that it is Correct article usage
an unetchical
unetchical
attitude when ignoring Correct your spelling
unethical
people
. For example
, According to
british
culture, online technology is Change the capitalization
British
fobidden
during afternoon tea, resultingCorrect your spelling
forbidden
Change preposition
in a
a
intense connection Change the article
an
each
other. Change preposition
with each
This
is why the prevention of this
disrespect
manner Replace the word
disrespectful
such
as banning the use
of mobile phone
should Fix the agreement mistake
phones
be consider
to create Change the verb form
be considered
warmer
atmosphere and Add an article
a warmer
enjoying
the moment.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
enjoy
phone
is Add an article
the phone
the
vital thing that could not escape. The purpose of banning Correct article usage
a
phone
activities
in certain place
will make Fix the agreement mistake
places
people
uncomfortable since it will stop their regular activities
.However
, I recommend to
actively Change preposition
apply
educate
Wrong verb form
educating
people
associated to
Change preposition
with
disrepect
Correct your spelling
disrespect
manner
of online Fix the agreement mistake
manners
activities
while
gathering. Using this
anticipation, the use
of phone
is not the thing that should not be Fix the agreement mistake
phones
worry
.Wrong verb form
worried
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