Write about the following topic. The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In the contemporary era, there is ongoing debate about whether mobile

phone

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should be restricted in several

area

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as well as

smoking regarding its implications.

This

essay argues that

people

have a choice to

use

their

phone

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phones

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wherever.

In addition

,

phone

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the phone

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has several modern features that

people

needed in daily life. Despite the fact that mobile

phone

have

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several negative

impact

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impacts

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associated

to

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antisocial in society, some

people

believe that mobile

phone

should not be forbidden in certain places since it has a lot of benefit in

this

modern era.

People

can

use

phone

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for several

activities

like marketing, communication, and entertainment.

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, the influencer will

works

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using their

phone

24/7 to make

a

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money, offering

positive

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the positive

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impact of

the

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online technology.

In

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the other hand,

people

may believe that

phone

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phones

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should not be used

in particular

activities

,

such

as dinner or family

gathering

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.

This

is not only because mobile

phone

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phones

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can

distracting

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distract

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mind

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the mind

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while

talking but

also

due to

the fact that it is

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an unetchical

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unetchical

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unethical

attitude when ignoring

people

.

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,

According to

british

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culture, online technology is

fobidden

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forbidden

during afternoon tea, resulting

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in a

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a

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intense connection

each

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with each

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other.

This

is why the prevention of

this

disrespect

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disrespectful

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manner

such

as banning the

use

of mobile

phone

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phones

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should

be consider

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be considered

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to create

warmer

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a warmer

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atmosphere and

enjoying

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enjoy

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the moment. In conclusion,

phone

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the phone

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is

the

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vital thing that could not escape. The purpose of banning

phone

activities

in certain

place

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places

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will make

people

uncomfortable since it will stop their regular

activities

.

However

, I recommend

to

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actively

educate

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educating

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people

associated

to

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with

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disrepect

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disrespect

manner

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manners

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of online

activities

while

gathering. Using

this

anticipation, the

use

of

phone

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phones

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is not the thing that should not be

worry

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.