The charts below show the average number of calories(that is, amount of energy in food and drink) that a person consumes daily in five countries, and the percentage of the adult population that was overweight or obese in 2013 in those countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average number of calories(that is, amount of energy in food and drink) that a person consumes daily in five countries, and the percentage of the adult population that was overweight or obese in 2013 in those countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average number of calories(that is, amount of energy in food and drink) that a person consumes daily in five countries, and the percentage of the adult population that was overweight or obese in 2013 in those countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates data about the
consumption
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pattern of fish and different types of meat in a particular country, in a 25-year period, between 1979 and 2004.
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,
while
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the
consumption
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of
beef
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and
lamb
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reduced, the
amount
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of consumed
chicken
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increased. Fish
consumption
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has been fairly constant over the period in question. In 1979, each resident ate well above 200
Grams
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of
beef
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per
week
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. The
amount
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of eaten
lamb
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was almost 150
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, and the
amount
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of
chicken
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was slightly lower, at less than 150. Over the next five years, the
amount
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of
chicken
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one person ate each
week
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improved, and it surpassed the
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for
lamb
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. The
figure
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for
chicken
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continued to witness an upward trend
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until it peaked at almost 250
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per
week
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between 1999 and 2004. By 2004, the
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had taken over all the others, and it was the most consumed type of meat. The
amount
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of
beef
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eaten by a person per
week
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plummeted between 1979 and 1984, but it
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jumped to about 250
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in 1984. Having remained fairly steady for the next five years,
then
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beef
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consumption
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saw a consistent decline, and it reached almost 100 in 2004. The
amount
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of
lamb
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eaten by each person per
week
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also
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declined, and the
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ended at just above 50. The line for fish experienced a slight increase to 50, and it did not change considerably during the period in question.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, beef, lamb, amount, chicken, grams, week, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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