Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email • recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn • explain how your friend could learn this sport • suggest that you both learn this sport together.

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email in regard to the recommendation that you asked me about a new sport that you would like to learn. The sport that I would suggest is football as it is a highly intellectual game and it is one of the best sports in the world. Football keeps you physically fit and it requires certain strategies to win that keep your mind

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it daily with your friends. To learn new moves and techniques you can get a coach or watch online videos of professional players that will enhance your experience and you will learn fast.

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sport and I think we should learn it together as it will be a good experience for both of us. It will help us learn fast and be physically fit and as

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our friendship will grow stronger. Thanks, yours sincerely, Munesh

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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