The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map provides information on the proposition of two potential locations for the new school in
Canterbury
town
. Overall
, it shows that one site is located in the countryside, while
the other place is in the township centre.
On the one hand, looking at the proposed first location for the school, one noticeable feature based on the map is that it will be built in the countryside on the west side of Canterbury
. This
location will be very convenient for Canterbury
Town
and its neighbour, Sturry Town
, which has a population of 7,000 people. Furthermore
, this
proposed site will also
be adjacent to the main roads. Therefore
, accessible to everyone.
On the other hand
, the second site will be constructed in the centre of Canterbury
Town
, inside the township centre. In contrast
to the other plan, there is no road adjacent to the area. However
, this
is accessible by the road on the west that connects Canterbury
to Chartham town
, which is 7 km away with a population of 4,500 people.Submitted by meliarizkina86 on
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