The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map provides information on the proposition of two potential locations for the new school in

Canterbury

town

Overall

, it shows that one site is located in the countryside,

while

the other place is in the township centre. On the one hand, looking at the proposed first location for the school, one noticeable feature based on the map is that it will be built in the countryside on the west side of

Canterbury

This

location will be very convenient for

Canterbury

Town

and its neighbour, Sturry

Town

, which has a population of 7,000 people.

Furthermore

this

proposed site will

also

be adjacent to the main roads.

Therefore

, accessible to everyone.

On the other hand

, the second site will be constructed in the centre of

Canterbury

Town

, inside the township centre.

In contrast

to the other plan, there is no road adjacent to the area.

However

this

is accessible by the road on the west that connects

Canterbury

to Chartham

town

, which is 7 km away with a population of 4,500 people.

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3 paragraphs

171 words

7.00

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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urban planning
infrastructure
residential
accessibility
proximity
town centre
site
amenities
proposed development
population distribution
environmental impact
traffic congestion
community needs
educational facilities
public transport
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