The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their graduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their graduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart shows the percentage of
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destinations
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of Anthropology graduates after completing their undergraduate degree course in
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university,
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the table provides information on how earning range of Anthropologists after five years' work.
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, considering the career path of graduate students
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half of the percentage and other categories including unemployed and not known were included other half of the percentage. After five
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, the highest and the lowest wages ranges showed in freelance consultant and the government sector.
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at the pie chart, full-time workers were at 52% and part-time workers were at 15%. The part-time postgraduate study and full-time with post
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study accounted for 5% and 8% respectively. Most notably, totalling 20% of those who
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become unemployed and not known. With regard to the table, the highest earners ($100,000+) were those in freelance
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consultant
and government sector at 40% and 50% respectively. The $25,000-50,000 wage bracket comprised the lowest figure for those three sectors (5%-10%).
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