Number of books borrowed from four village libraries. The line table shows the number of books that have been interacted from different four rural libraries since June and September 2014 and the pie chart presents
The line table shows the
number
of books
that have been interacted from different four rural libraries since June and September 2014 and the pie chart presents data on the types of books
that were most taken from rural libraries.
In general,it is clear from the graph that the model fluctuated significantly,expect
for Rey slip,and the most borrowed type.
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except
According to
the schedule,Rey slip
lent more than 300 Capitalize word
Slip
books
to it"s customers in June,which was the highestrate
among these three libraries.But over time,the Correct your spelling
highest rate
number
of books
has significantly decreased to 150.250 books
interacted in Sutton-Wood,and this
is more than in West Eaton and Church Mount,but after a while
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,while
this
number
of books
that
borrowed Correct pronoun usage
apply
their
customers grew from 50 Change preposition
from their
books
to 150 books
.In Sutton Wood,noticeable numbers were changed,they decreased from 250 to 100 and in September increased to 300 books
,which shows the highest number
of books
.The number
of book interactions decreased in Rey slip
to 150 Wrong verb form
slipping
books
.
The most popular type of interaction of books
was fiction,it was 43%,and almost a fifth of the genre interacted with biographies and it was 19%.The lowest were Self-Hepl,history,fiction
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and fiction
the
were 14% and 10%.Correct article usage
apply
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