Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Alternative

energy

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sources are considered the answer to our reliance on fossil fuels, as sources of alternative

energy

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are low emitters of CO2 and are sustainable means of providing electrical

power

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. Critics of green

energy

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contented that current technologies are

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too costly or impractical to replace our current

energy

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. I partially agree with

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opinion

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the reasons which be discussed in the following paragraphs. The advantages of green and renewable

energy

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are obvious. There is no worry about dwindling supplies of expensive resources. Solar

power

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will never run out. Once the initial costs of the equipment are paid off, the electricity is basically free.

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, another major advantage of these sources of

energy

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is that they have low emissions.

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, wind turbines and hydroelectric

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stations have no

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air pollution or the risk of environmental contamination.

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this

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notion of a perfect world of free and non-polluting

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draws criticism.

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solar

power

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will not work at night or even in every country that has windy air or sunny days. More importantly, replacing our

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need

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from fuel resources with green

energy

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require

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constant research and development and

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government cooperation. One

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obstacle to the

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adoption

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of green

energy

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is nuclear

power

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. Many countries provide their amount of

energy

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from nuclear

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and consider it as a more practical solution than messing up with the wind and sun. In conclusion, there is little doubt that we will soon need to wean off fossil fuels and on to an alternative fuel source. I partially agree with the idea that the most expensive infrastructures for the implementation of renewable

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will

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our fossil fuels very soon.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

In the past, when student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these developments? You should use your own idea,knowledge and experience

It is a good idea to have large public spaces in towns and cities such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

Discipline is ever increasing probelm in modern schools. Some people think that discpline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others this that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinioon.