The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The given graph displays what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The schedule illustrates the
salaries
of the anthropologists in work next five years. All in all, the highest percentage is mentioned full-time
workers
in the pie-chart,
while
part-time
workers
and postgrad study indicate the lowest
index
. As for the table, Private companies show high
salaries
in the first and second categories
while
mentioned lowest grades in other categories. In
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pie chart , double indexes mentioned the same sign 8% which are full-time postgrad study and not known. At that time, full-time
workers
became dominant with 52 percentage followed by part-time
workers
at 15 %.
Whereas
the lowest
index
is mentioned by part-time
workers
and postgrad study. As for the
salaries
of Anthropology graduates, Freelance consultants and the Government sector are mentioned in the lowest
index
from $ 25 000 to 50 000
salaries
. But the Government sector was registered elevated
index
to $ 100 000
salaries
among the three graduates.
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