the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant

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for lesser

prouctivity

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productivity

in agricultural

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worldiwde

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worldwide

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major

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of the world. Both the

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tables

give us preeminent

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for

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degradion

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degradation

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them into smaller criteria which provides us with a clear picture

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the cause. The

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depicts four major

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for

land

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degradation

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in the world and

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determines the

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percentage

of damage each

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has done, it

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vividly

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compares

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regions

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of the world and summarises the percentage of

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degraded in a particular region. The

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shown in the pie chart are

over grazing

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,

deforestation

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,

over-cultivation

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and other. 35% of the

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is degraded

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over-grazing which could be easily avoided by secluding only

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areas for the

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cattle

castles

, the other major reason is

deforestation

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the

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loses all its fertility and takes a long time to revive, it

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predominently

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affects the environment by adding to the global warming, 28% of the

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is degraded by

over-cultivation

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, it takes away all the nutrients and the strength of the soil. The second table shows a comparison between 3 major

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of the country that are North America,Europe and

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Oceania

, The damage

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land

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done by each region is

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into

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criterias

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criteria

.i.e

deforestation

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,

over-cultivation

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and over-grazing. Among all the

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regions

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Europe

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more

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land

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degradation

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by holding 23% the major causes were

deforestation

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9.8%,

over-cultivation

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7.7% and over-grazing 5.5%.

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Oceania

held the major share of 11.3% of

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degradation

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due to

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over grazing

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among the

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in contrast

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had

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degradation

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due to

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over-cultivation

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. North America had the least percentage of damage by only holding 5% of

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degraded

land

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.