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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. Introduce yourself Explain what sort of job you would like Say what experience and skills you have

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Anjali Mathur, currently pursuing a Master's in Business Administration. I am writing
this
 letter to apply for a part-time job in order to fulfil my term fees. I am a university-going student having Accounts as my major subject, I want to apply for jobs that give me an opportunity to use my accountancy skills and knowledge to the best capacity.
In addition
 to that, I had 1 year of experience in Tally Accounting software.
Apart from
this
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 I worked as a cashier for 6 months at Cosco.
Moreover
, I am excellent
in
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 maintaining records and journal entries
as well as
 profit and loss accounts for the organization. I am willing to work 3 days a week with flexible timings.
Furthermore
, I would like to join at the earliest and work wholeheartedly. Hoping for a positive reply from an organization that suits my needs
as well as
 their requirements. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Rahul Mishra
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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