The chart illustrates the number of people from history museums, British museums, national museums and science museums who visited different museums in London.
The diagram exposes the total of
visitors
to four different museums in London from June
to August.
It is clear that
from the chart, National Museum
, History Museum
, British Museum
and Science Museum
have fluctuating guests from month to month. However
, the British Museum
has the highest total visitor among others during the time range.
To begin
with, we can say that the British Museum
is the most
favourite Correct quantifier usage
apply
museum
to visit because it has the highest number of guests. Starting in June
, it has around 400,000 guests and remains stable until July. In August it has a drastic surge to almost 750,000 visitors
. Then
, it gradually decreased in the next two months.
In contrast
, the National Museum
is the least favourite compared to others because only 200,000 people came to the National Museum
in June
. After that, there is a slight decline in the number of people in July. Fortunately, in August it has more visitors
came to the museum
and reached around 300,000. On the other hand
, it started to drop from September to October with only less than 190,000 visitors
.
While
looking at History Museum
data, it has the second-highest total number of people visiting the museum
from June
to October.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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