The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada, and the European Community

The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada, and the European Community
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wheat
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exports
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during 1985-1990 in Australia, Canada and
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Community
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. In general, Canada had the largest
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export compared to the other two regions but
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Community
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has a better
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exports
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trend because the
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less fluctuated.
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Community
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had a slight decrease in
wheat
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export volume in 1986
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compared to the previous period. After that, the
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remained stagnant until 1988. Fortunately, starting from 1988, the
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of
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exports
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had a significant increase of around 30% until the next year and kept increasing until 1990.
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, the
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export in Canada dropped to 14
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of
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tonnes in 1986. After that, the
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of
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exports
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drastically increased until 1988.
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, it
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had a significant decrease of almost 50% in 1989 and started to increase again until 1990. The
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of
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exports
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has a different story in the
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community
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. It started increasing from 1985 to 1986, but
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the proportion decreased gradually from 1986 until 1989 and remained steady after that
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, european, community, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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