you recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say what the participants liked about the hotel Explain why they were unhappy about the food Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
This
is regarding my feedback o Linking Words
quality
of Correct article usage
the quality
Correct article usage
the foods
foods
that Fix the agreement mistake
food
recently
Add a missing verb
was recently
organiseed
in your Correct your spelling
organised
compnay
and my office Correct your spelling
company
collegues
felt Correct your spelling
colleagues
disappoitment
Correct your spelling
disappointment
on
it.
From the Change preposition
about
beggining
the Correct your spelling
beginning
ambians
and gesture Correct your spelling
ambience
was
excellent! literally hall space is sufficient and proper seating arrangements,following Change the verb form
were
to
the air Change preposition
apply
conditioining
Correct your spelling
conditioning
is
good and neat Correct subject-verb agreement
are
hygine
restrooms Correct your spelling
hygiene
was
clean.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
On the other hand
, everything feels good except the food Linking Words
qulity
, Correct your spelling
quality
vegetables
are salty, spicy and oil, Correct article usage
the vegetables
the
rice is overcooked. Correct word choice
and the
Linking Words
similarly
catering persons are too slow, Add a comma
,similarly
Linking Words
finally
sweets served Add a comma
,finally
is
not good and the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
taste
is too sweet.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, to improve Linking Words
this
in future avoid adding more Linking Words
masala's
for the starters because it will spoil the entire Change noun form
masalas
taste
of the Use synonyms
recepie
. if you felt anything bad Correct your spelling
recipe
taste
the items once the cooking finishes and before moving onto Use synonyms
serving
table. one of my humble suggestion is to buy Correct article usage
the serving
a
fresh vegetables because clean vegetables gives a food Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
taste
better than we expected and it will Use synonyms
cooked
very juicy.
Looking forward Wrong verb form
cook
for
Change preposition
to
you
response too in future events.
Thanks & Regards
Shyam Ranjith SChange the pronoun
your
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.