The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The table represents information about
number
of workers and Add an article
the number
a number
factories
in England and Wales over a
5 decades, from 1851 to 1901.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Overall
, it can be seen significant
Correct article usage
a significant
rose
in Correct your spelling
rise
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
factories
, while
total
Change the article
a total
the total
number
of employees
have
dropped throughout the whole period. Change the verb form
has
Moreover
, the gap between number
of male and female Change the article
a number
the number
employees
become
Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
marginally
.
The Change the word
marginal
number
of total employees
have
declined significantly, from 477100 in 1851 to 61000 in 1901. Change the verb form
has
In addition
, over a decade from 1861 to 1871 factories
lost more than the
half of the workers. Correct article usage
apply
Factories
number
, meanwhile, showed a big boom, raising to just under Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
than
three times of initial data(from 225 to 600).
Change preposition
apply
In
the beginning of the period, Change the preposition
At
discrepancy
between male and female workers was approximately 100000 people, declining over the period to reach 1000 individuals in 1901. Another interesting point is that in 1861 there Add an article
the discrepancy
a discrepancy
was
more female Change the verb form
were
employees
than male, 160000 and 131780 respectively.Submitted by sagynysh.mutigulliyeva.01 on
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