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As computers are being used more and move in education. There will soon be no role for the teacher in classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As everybody knows
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we live technology time. People can
use
 it everywhere it navodays sac as education. İt has a big role in there. many
students
use
computers
 for their homework, study, get some
informatationor
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information
 research everything. İ believe
computers
 get
instead
 of
teachers
one
 day. ,
,
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However
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this
 has some advantages and disadvantages. On the
one
 hand, we had
blackboard
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 15 years ago.
However
 many classes
use
 smart boards
instead
 of blackboards. Because it is so useful than
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 board, no need to write everything only open the computer and show
students
 what you want like pictures, essays even
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videos.
For example
,
one
 of my friends who is a
teacher
 said to me;
when
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 we pass to
computers
 for lessons, we are so comfortable and concentre in class. The example shows us,
computers
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that computers
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 wanna being more in education and
be
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 no role for the
teacher
 in a classroom.
On the other hand
,
computers
use
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for education in the classroom.
however
, when
students
 want can ask their
teacher
 and
teachers
 know which
students
 need everything and all
teachers
 have a strategy for each of their
students
.
For instance
,
one
 of a
teacher
(I saw on the TV two years ago) can see their student's ability to dance and the student thank his
teacher
 very popular dancer in Turkey. As an example, many
teachers
 help their
students
.
To sum up
, we need
computers
 because
I
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they
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 make our life easier and
gives
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a
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us a
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lot of information
to
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us
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. We the other side, we need
teachers
 because only a computer is not enough for
students
.
İn
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In
 my opinion, we won't have
teachers
 in the classroom when
computers
 more develop and can answer questions, that time won't need
teachers
 even building of school.
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