you work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter complain about charger which is not working properly .
Its
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very slow in charging . I bought it in your shop .unfortunately now
its
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it's
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not even working .I hope you will soon replace or repair the product .
Subsequently
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I borrowed
charger
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a charger
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from my friend but
its
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not working properly so all my
works
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are pending .I intended to complete all my
works
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unfortunately
i
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was not able to complete all my works .
Also
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my final project
also
near to submit for due dates. If you need of any
recipit
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recipient
of the products please feel to ask me
i
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will send the
vouncher
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voucher
vouchers
as soon as possible
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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