The charts show the percentages of family income spent in different categories in South Korea and Singapore in the years 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the percentages of family income spent

in different categories in South Korea and Singapore in

the years 2000 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below compares the
number
of American households based on their annual earnings in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
,
while
most figures did not
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a considerable change, the
number
of
families
who had the highest and the lowest income rose. In 2007, 25
million
American
families
earned
lass
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less
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than 25,000 dollars,
whereas
almost 27
million
earned between 25,000 and 49,900. Both figures
then
jumped to almost 28 and 30,
respctively
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respectively
. Over the next 4 years,
although
both numbers witnessed a slight decrease, they reached 27 and 28
millions
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, respectively, which is more than the figures in 2007. As regards the
families
whose income was between 50,000 and 74,999, the
number
remained steady at almost 20
million
. If we look at the
number
of households with more than 100,000 dollars of annual income, it was
lamost
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almost
30
million
in 2007. Despite a minute drop in 2011, the
number
then
peaked at about 35
million
in 2015. The
number
of
families
who earned 75,000 to 99,999 dollars annually was almost 15
million
in 2007. It fell by a negligible amount in 2011
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and
then
reached 15
million
in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, families, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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